ОГЭ английский на сколько баллов написано данное письмо?
(лучше качества нет) Кто может поясните почему столько-то баллов и если есть ошибки то где

On the picture l can see a megapolis(city) There are some colorful cars , driving on the road. I can see a flower shop and opposite this shop is situated the bus stop. There ia also a bank, between cinema and swimming pool. On the second floor of house in which i can see a swimming pool, there is also school. The hospital is situated next to the cinema, or opposite the flower shop.

А какой у тебя город?

They have.......................

Sport plays a big role in our life. Many people do sport in our country. They want to stay healthy. Sport is a good mean of struggling with stress. In my opinion sport is important for healthy free time. Sport also makes people strong and prepares a lot of joy. Some people participate in sports, others prefer watching them on TV. It is known that walking for an hour is healthier than irregular participation in any active physical activities. To keep fit some people join special classes or take part in aerobics or yoga, do some kind of training in a gym. Others play football, badminton, volleyball, tennis and other.